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Old 05-04-2006   #11
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ayyo justin, u can't stand beside my rhymes
show me yours, i'll show u mine

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The doctors u'll need after our battle r known as Psychologics
I'll tell the nurses 2 hold a bed 4 u & I'ma make sure u come back 4 it
I'll mess up ur face & lips, slit ur stomach & watch ur gut split
Gut u with that razor that I use to shave my nuts with
if u get me pissed u gonna get more than dissed
u gonna get ripped outta ya skin like shrimp
its about time 2 say peace out
but talk shit & i'll punch ya teeth out!


PS: no offense...bass u know how it goes...waitin' for ya rhyme
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I donnw who are u, just ur name justin
u lay like a chick when you're loggin' in
dis forum , i'm not a moran, ur makin' a sin
while u diss, look what u missed, do u think u'll score a win ??
crazy *******s like da gin, so stop takin'
I feel that dany wanna ban us
i'm the red line he can't cross
but he'll kick da asses of the weirdos

P.S; of course khayyeh no offense, we can undertand it
and sorry, it have beeng a long time since i didn't heard any rap song and i'm not writing at this time, but u have burned the fire up under my ass
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I'm sick, call me da germ, my rhymes make MCs squirm
u're played out like a perm, I'll have u eatin’ dirt like a hungry worm
ya’ll know ya’ll like my freestylin' shit
cuz I kill ppl who gon’ truly be missed
if rappin’ is a monkey, I’ma giant gorilla
cuz my sweet rhymes is da ones that kilt ya
b4 u step 2 me make sure u got what it takes
cuz my rhymes determine if u a real rapper or fake
Dany's gonna ban us but I ask 4 a challenge
so gimme ur best lines cuz I know I can manage...
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that's really great ya Justin, khalas khayyeh ur the winner, i should listen again to make a competition with u, but for now ur the best, excellent
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man come one... i know u're better than that..and 'til now there's no winner cuz u juss ain't lsning 2 rap music...so when u get ready...reply to my post..peace out..
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"Heartbroken"

I feel, as I am lost in a storm
Where winds, sea & sky are above the norm
I feel I'm locked as everyone looks with pity & shame
My heart knows no other, as if it were stained
Will I ever break away from this plain?
Or will I stay forever trapped in its pain?
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Away in the hood was born a child
an evil kid but genius in the same side
ready to ride himself to the fame
to the streets and the rap game
J was his name before he rap
the life&the freinds.the crack was very snap
to grab him to be a loco renegade
full of pain,crazy in all what he made
but he grow up in the hood wit a gun &kinfe
to be safe & protect his fu*kin life
cuz he's smart and just a gangster incest
a rapist if you put him in a chest
but now,he's free,like a real man who wanna be
out of his f**kin past,s**t!!that's me!!
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"Never Let You Down"

The fee binds him, he just cant have a shallow free mind when
realizing somethin’ other than a shadow’s behind him
a young girl; this brunette *****, whom his feelings immense for
even when she’s next door his hearts still beatin’ against hers
with the thirst of his 1st love, he’d go any distance 4 pleasure
the instant he met her he promised 2 be with her forever
as her red paint-brush lips were quickly makin’ him a art
that was amazin’ in da start, now breakin’ ‘em apart
2 eq point of no return, but this one geeks a cold dude
a bold mack that’ll go back whether or not he’s suppose to
but she’s moved on 2 another, a female lover.. he sees this, its clear
dripped in tears, he’s hit with fears that maybe the ***** is queer
his nerves have burst, prolly wouldn’t if he had heard of her
turns into a murderer & burns ‘em with da furniture
da rooms up in flames,da whole scenario was somethin’ lame
but stuck with blame, he feels a huge amount of ****in’ pain
cuz he loved her but also cuz of a pact he made
that no matter what, mad or ****ed.. He’d treat her ass the same
with love that is, mostly hug & kiss... plus caress through town
his first words, not meant 2 hurt her were “I’ll never let u down”
dishonest, he broke his promise, or so it seems at first
thinkin’ deep gives birth 2 a way 4 him 2 keep his word
so amongst the fire, none on earth could call him liar
he picks her corpse up & holds her till he’s engulfed in fire…
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Look ,I ain't gonna talk 'bout my life here
while the whole world's napped by the fear
the dangers and the wars became very near
you can call me queer but you can kiss my butt
cuz I don't give a **** about your nutt
you just a ****,dirty like 98 % of the people that I know
who live in the shit ,who know?? that's their dough
for all of them who only dream and push me to curse
like a little sinister heavy since my birth
a world that pull the people through the worse
first fear I ever had cussin' the church
but I planed to keep it real on the earth
just askin' me why put me in the nerv
maybe this shit will never be released
or never be leaked before I get freed
cuz there's no need for another mother****er to sing
or to performe,there's a lot now wearing g-strings
just a mass confusion just lying
It's very discusting now more lunatics
hell yeah you can call them chicks
so the truth that they're gettin' older
and world pass'em by through a flabby border
my heart go colder than december
when I see or I hear them
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