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Old 05-10-2006   #21
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Away in the hood was born a child
an evil kid but genius in the same side
ready to ride himself to the fame
to the streets and the rap game
J was his name before he rap
the life & the friends.the crack was very snap
to grab him to be a loco renegade
full of pain,crazy in all what he made
but he grow up in the hood wit a gun & knife
to be safe & protect his ****in life
cuz he's smart and just a gangster incest
a rapist if u put him in a chest
but now,he's free,like a real man who wanna be
out of his ****in past,shit!!that's me!!
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Old 05-11-2006   #22
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hey justin, those are my rhymes , i don't understand why u posted them !!
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Old 05-12-2006   #23
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cuz i love 'em
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loool, but there's a copyright
llooooollllll
i'll sue u in a court, i'll make u pay billions of dollars bcuz u posted my lyrics
looooooooooooooooooooooooll
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fi wassta, i'll get over it looooool w ma fi shi byesbot that THIS RHYME IS YOURSSSSS :P... i'll buy the copyright:P
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Hey guys...
Have you ever tried ta write a poem in arabic,french or english?

Share it with us...
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Old 04-02-2007   #27
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A celui qui a détruit ma vie...


Une larme est tombée sur ma joue,
Le jour où,
Un poignard me transperça le coeur,
En affectant mon àme et mon bohneur.

Ces images qui dans ma mémoire,
Que je ne peux m'empécher de revoir,
Reviennent sans cesse,
Me hante et me délaisse.

On a profité de moi,
On a détruit une partie de moi,
Pourquoi m'avoir poignardé ?
Pourquoi m'avoir forcé?

Ma blessure me gêne,
Et je ressens de la rage et de la haine,
Au plus profond de moi je me ronge et me morfonde,
Qu'ais-je fais au monde?
Pour qu'on me fasse souffrir,
Avec cette écorchure qui me fait mal à en mourir !

Je ne pourrai jamais pardonner,
Tout le mal que vous avez su me donner,
Suis-je une fille banale ?
Moi qui maintenant me sens sale ?

Après ce drame,
Qui a affaiblie la lueur de ma flamme,
Vous osez encore me regarder de haut,
Vous qui avez osé poser votre main sur ma peau !

Je me sens blaissée, humiliée,
Je n'ai qu'un désir : "me vanger"
Mais ma sensibilité,
Ne m'aurai pas épargniée,
Je suis déja assez brisée,
Et j'aimerais me sentir apaisée !


Ecrit par moi,le 6 avril 2006
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Yes, sure I always do...
I write in arabic, poems, articles...
but i can't share them with u cz my pc writes only in latin font
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Old 04-02-2007   #29
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this I wrote it when I was 14 yrs old but it is a meaningless poem

Before I go to sleep at night
I see the moonlight
From left to right
That has the stone ignite
When I am in the flight
And eating an icecream lite
And after,brushing my teeth with flourite
You could can or might
Get a meal or just a bite
To see the wonderful sight
But please having no fight
With having such a height
And flying the beautiful kite
And telling my parents the best goodnight

sweetdreams everybody


Done by me On March 7 2003
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i hate writing..i hate arabic literature and english literature..i dont know french a lot.coz im english educated..never wrote a poem..r u crazy walla badde...
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