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Old 04-06-2007   #51
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last night i went to the sea
to the place where i used to be
hoping i could find u there
your spirit was flowing in the air
the night was soft,i sat on the shore
i felt ur love in my soul
you're my dreams,you're all i need
without u am nothing at all
Oh Lord i came to tell you
things i couldnt keep in my mind


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Old 04-06-2007   #52
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This is the poem I wrote the night i attempted suicide,the 10th day of june 2005, few minutes before i held the knife...

Touch Of Death...
Just slit my wrists and cut my throat.
Don’t wipe away my tears.
I know it’s what you all want,
I don’t hide away my fears.
I hold the knife up to my throat.
It’s harder then I think.
I take the swipe, blood pours out.
I don’t think I have time to blink.
My heart beats slower.
I panic from the sight.
What have I just done!
My body feels weak and tight.
It seems sad I have to go,
Seems sad I have to die.
I will be 6 ft under soon,
So now I say bye bye!
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Old 04-06-2007   #53
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A KNOCK ON MY HEART

knock on my heart
is all wat i need
to finish this
just one more
cuz i know the truth
i know the future
am an augur to myself
an augur of the truth
of my truth of myself
already known
result of wat i want
wat i need
everything i want to change
it allcan change it to better
but shes......
i know the truth
i know the future
waitin for the knock
the one takes me home
eternally in my home
where i belong
am an augur to myself
an augur of the truth
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Je T'aime...Toi Non Plus...J.....
La vie n'est qu'un rêve,
Qui,lorsque tu te réveilles,
T'emmène loin du paradis...
Loin de moi...Loin d'ici...
Tu n'as plus voulu de moi,
Alors que je ne pensais qu'à toi...
On ne peut forcer quelqu'un à aimer,
La preuve:Tu m'as encore évitée...
La vérité est dure à accepter...
C'est pour cela que je dois t'oublier...

C'est Fini...J.....
Ce poème t'es dédié
Pour te prouver mon amour
Et montrer au monde entier
A quel point nous sommes liés
Comme on dit pour toujous...
Depuis plus d'un demi-an,
Bons et mauvais moments,
Nous ont accompagnés,
Mais,malheuresement,
Tout s'est brisé entre nous.
Notre lien,a explosé,et,maintenant,
Noire est la couleur de mes yeux...
Saurons nous un jour
Retrouver ce lien et cet amour?
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Old 04-06-2007   #55
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Pourquoi je t’aime ?


Le cœur toujours abatée ds son silence

Ne pouvant émettre ses sentiments avec rebondance
Se tait, muet et se fond ds sa tolérance
Comment lui dire :
« Je t’aime et j’ai besoin de ta présence ! »
Comment lui crier :
« Tu me manques dans ton absence ! »
Je ne pense qu ‘à toi, même ds mes vacances

J’essaie de te fuir, mais je ne trouve une méfiance
La solitude me ronge malgré ma patience
J’attends toute ma vie avec indulgence
Si aujourd’hui ns sommes réunis, pourquoi éloigner notre distance
Soit courageux et de notre amour ais confiance

Que notre amour ait la force de résistance
Viens, prend moi ds tes bras avec ta force et ta puissance
Et laisse ta masse se pencher et me couvrir avec sa dominance
Protège moi ds un abri tranquille, loin de cette souffrance
Et donne-moi ton amour avec abondance
Cette nuit, toi et moi ensemble, aimons sans prudence
Et laissons cette nuit marquer une différence
Pourquoi je t’aime ? je crois que c’est la chance
Ou le destin qui a réunit notre chemin sur un même sens
Peu importe la raison pour laquelle mon amour ait existante
Puisque c’est mon cœur qui t’es aimé malgré ta délaissante !!!
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Old 04-06-2007   #56
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حلم



يوم أعلم أنّك لن تأتي،

يزحف اليأس الى قلبي،

و تبلّل الدموع وجهي،



و يقبض الألم على روحي ..

يوم تأتي،

حلم يأخذني الى ذراعيك،


و تتّحد شفتاي شفتاك،

و تركع روحي تحت قدميك،

و أن إستيقظ دون عينيك
عندها أكون قد إنتهيت ...
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كلام في الحب



القدر وضعني أمام عينيك،

لأكحّل عينيّّّّّّّّّّّّّ في النظر اليك.

كم أنت جميل في طلّتك،
في بريق عينيك و سحر بسمتك...

أراك يوميًّا في منامي،
حتّى أصبحت جزءًا من كياني...

حبّك غلغل في الصميم،
و الله وحده كم أهواك عليم...

لقد غدوت كلّ أمالي،
فأنت من رسمته فارس أحلامي...

تعالَ إليَّ، وابقى في حبّك
لأنسى الدنيا، وابقى بقيّة عمري بقربك.



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My Love

My love is like an ocean
It goes down so deep
My love is like a rose
Whose beauty you want to keep.

My love is like a river
That will never end
My love is like a dove
With a beautiful message to send.

My love is like a song
That goes on and on forever
My love is like a prisoner
It's to you that I surrender.



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I Will Love You Forever

I love you so deeply,
I love you so much,
I love the sound of your voice
And the way that we touch.
I love your warm smile
And your kind, thoughtful way,
The joy that you bring
To my life every day.
I love you today
As I have from the start,
And I'll love you forever
With all of my heart.

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If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.

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Old 04-07-2007   #58
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Can anyone write a friendly / happy poem? .... plz u r makin us crying in here!!! 10x for the gr8 poems btw ... :malak:
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Can anyone write a friendly / happy poem? .... plz u r makin us crying in here!!! 10x for the gr8 poems btw ... :malak:
man who can be happy and hes alive?? happiness comes for seconds , sadness comes for weeks...
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Can anyone write a friendly / happy poem? .... plz u r makin us crying in here!!! 10x for the gr8 poems btw ... :malak:
I'll write something about happiness but it is in french i think.cuz am fed up of writing in english bi hal yawmen i will type it here
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