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mr_j 02-04-2009 12:31 PM

silent assassin
 
France 1758


The king: Louis XV,(again the fictional character that will die at first) a powerful ruler, whatever he says goes, he considers himself and his bloodline to be holy and above human, and therefore he is against marriage with non nobles

Phenomenal: he is the prime minister in the royal palace, he was in love with jess since before she became the queen, but then the king forced her to marry him and phenomenal was helpless to do anything L

Edgard Chammas: he is the eldest son of the king and the legal heir to the throne of France, however what was hidden from the king is that Edgard is actually the son of phenomenal the prime minister, whome jess was in love with before she was forced to marry the king :p
Edgard is a generous spender, he has little insight for war strategies and management, all he cares about is spending money and living happily ever after.

The Princess: edgard’s fiancé, she’d do anything for him :p she’s a sweet person and really loves edgard and he can trust her with anything.

Jess : the queen of france, she has 2 sons, edgard and sogelec, her eldest son edgard is the prime minister’s son, while her younger son sogelec is the king’s real biological son. The only people who are aware of that secret besides her are edgard and phenomenal, and the three of them decide it is time to tell the king the truth(sogelec doesn’t know and the king finds out before he dies, we’ll see how :p )

Crystal soul: she is a british agent sent to the royal palace to spy on the royal family and uncover their plans. She works undercover there as a maid. However the unexpected happened with her, she fell in love with prince sogelec, and now she finds herself in a great inner struggle between her duty to her country or her love to the prince :huh: if she tells him the truth he might hate her and have her killed. If she stays quiet and runs away with him, both the French and the british spies will hunt them forever. If she keeps stalling about not running away with Sogelec, he might think she doesn’t love him or she loves him for the money. What to do what to do? :yayi: :yayi:

Sogelec: charming good looking prince, Sogelec is more into abstract thinking art and poetry than into material possessions and power struggles. Morals and patriotism rank high in his head :p He loves Crystal soul(the palace maid as far as he knows) he is willing to run away with her and leave it all behind(since palace rules forbid marrying of nobles and commoners) but she is the one stalling and hesitating, and that is making him feel uneasy

Jak: nephew of the king, he loves black_ice, but again the king’s law says no mixing with commoners :huh: and unlike sogelec, jak is not willing to leave his riches and noble class behind for the one he loves. Which is why he seems to be getting nowhere in the current situation

Black_ice: the cook’s daughter(the cook being duce) she loves jak, but marriage seems only a far dream. Jak is too stubborn to leave his noble class for her at the same time too stubborn to let her go :p

Unregistered: king’s personal body guard, always by his side guarding him with his life :huh: a tall and large guy, his eye contact are said to make statues shiver :hawhaw:


Tony: minister of war, he is responsible for all the war affairs, (troops wages, fronts administration etc…) and he is involved in all the war meetings and plans


Malek: messenger from the American continent, he arrived that day to tell the king the fort at Louisbourg (French fort in the north American lands) has been seized by the British, and that the British threat is growing in that area

General Lebnen: he is responsible for all the british spies and assassins working in paris(including Crystal Soul), British spies and assassins report to him(through secret meetings, letters pigeons, smoke signals whatever) and take orders from him. Spies do not know each others, and this was made so if one spy is caught, he cannot uncover any of his/her partners.

Alias: musketeer general, high commander of the king’s elite guards(all for one and one for all kinda stuff) the troops under his command are hardened unflinching men feared for their reputation and capabilities in battle

Duce: da royal chef :W he makes good food. He’s also black ice’s father, he knows his daughter loves jak, and he tried convincing her to forget him”that’s gonna bring us nothing but trouble” he always said, but to no avail.

deAtheganized: he’s the treasurer, guardian of the royal funds. deAtheganized was stealing money from the treasury and he was worried that if the war continues for too long or becomes too viscious, eventually it will become apparent that he stole money and therefore would be caught

Neoxter: high commander of the French navy, Neoxter spent his better days fighting off the English, and he lost his arm doing so. Deep down he wants to get a break from this war, but it doesn’t seem that’s going to happen soon


Note: The order of characters are da same way as they registered in the thread(except for the order of female characters since I had to place queen and lover and whatever after whatever person they are tied to), same goes for the role they were given to take(on my scratch I wrote the story and character description and then I just replaced the names) therefore no description was meant for a specific person(the story was made before the registration thread even opened and before I even knew who was going to be in), so again leave the personal stuff out of this :Tawa: but then again I tried to make all characters as equally exciting as much as I could.

POLL FITS 15 MEMBERS ONLY SO NEOXTER'S NAME DIDN'T FIT
BUT HE IS STILL A SUSPECT :Tawa:

mr_j 02-04-2009 12:37 PM

Re: silet assassin
 
Ok so its France 1758, in the middle of the struggle with England. The English were gaining power in the American continent and were threatening the French colonies there. Our king and his war minister (Tony) as well as his musketeer general Alias and the loyal guard unregistered, were in the meeting hall discussing the current situation and the possible threats France is exposed to. After the meeting is over they walk out of the meeting room and into the living room adjacent to it, where they find queen jess and the prime minister Phenomenal and prince Edgard sitting there with a worried look on their faces. So the king approaches them and asks:”what’s going on here? What’s with the grim look on your faces?”
Jess replies:” we have something to tell you…could we get some privacy?”
-oh come on woman out with it, we are busy there is no time for privacies
And so jess explains to him that she was pregnant with Edgard before she married him, and that edgard is in fact the prime minister’s son. At the sound of that the king withdraws his sword angrily(as if he was going to kill someone) but then the war minister(tony) steps in front of him:
- my lord NO!
(Tony’s voice grabs the attention of Crystal Soul who was walking by the area, so she starts listening at the conversation through the door)
- (king)move out of the way, I will kill these traitors
- (Tony) my lord the last thing France needs right now is a royal scandal, there are other ways to settle this

The king furiously conceals his sword:” yes you’re right, we shall settle the matter in a more quiet way” then he looks at Edgard ”and to think you were going to be my legal heir, the throne will be turned to Sogelec and I will make sure that the lives of the three of you turn to hell. Just then, Malek enters the room(from a different door than the one Crystal soul was spying from :p it’s a big living room)
Malek: my lords, sorry to interrupt, but I have urgent news from the north American continent, our fort at Louisbourg has fallen in the hands of the British.
King: great, more good news! Round up the generals, we’ll have a meeting in one hour. And what went on in this room better stay in this room :Tawa:

One hour later, all the generals, Neoxter the navy commander, the war ministerTony, the musketeer general Alias, the treasurer deAtheganized and king’s guard unregistered were in that room. They started discussing war plans. Just then Alias hears a weird noise at the door, he stands up(the room goes quiet) and he openes the door, Crystal soul falls down from behind it :hawhaw:
Crystal soul(innocently):” oh excuse me my lords I must have tripped”
So the king shouts:” what is you business here?
- my lord I just came by to see if you need anything that’s all
-alright since you’re here make yourself useful, bring us some wine
-yes my lord(bows)
-and bring me my golden cup, I need to enjoy something today

http://www.nga.gov/exhibitions/2004/...exchange26.jpg

And so Crystal soul hurries to get a wine bottle and the king’s cup as not to miss any important detail from what is being said. She returns to the room and starts pouring wine in everyone’s cups and concentrates on what is being said. After everyone’s cups has been filled, the king raises his cup and says” cheers to you gentlemen, lets teach these English a lesson” and everyone drinks, shortly after he takes his sip, the king starts choking and he falls on the floor dead.



Notes:
1)The poison was in his cup and not in the wine bottle since he is the only one that got poisoned
2) the people who had access to the cup are the members listed in the poll
3) as you may notice a lot of the members playing were not mentioned in the story(second post) such as Black_ice, Sogelec etc… this does not make them any less of a suspect. But I considered that the story is long enough without mentioning them already, and then characters like Black_ice for example there is no way for her to be present in a war meeting :Tawa: and I considered that their motives and implications are expressed enough in their character’s descriptions. Next thread might put some of the other members more in the light. The story is again logical, coming threads will help clarify what the previous threads had while keeping their own clues :p
4)don’t forget to also ask yourselves, who would NOT be the assassin, elimination helps ;)

Happy hunting.

Malek 02-04-2009 12:57 PM

Re: silent assassin
 
Can you make the poll public??

mr_j 02-04-2009 12:58 PM

Re: silent assassin
 
sorry I forgot to do that
and I can't edit it and make it public :(
so please say who you are voting for
kain voted for sogelec :p

Neoxter 02-04-2009 01:12 PM

Re: silent assassin
 
I'm new to this game,
I voted for duce, do I have to state the reason ?

mr_j 02-04-2009 01:17 PM

Re: silent assassin
 
no as you wish, no reasons needed, just post so we'd know you cared :p

Malek 02-04-2009 01:23 PM

Re: silent assassin
 
I think it's Edgard, since after the King knew that he's not his son he decided to make Sogelec his legal heir to the throne of France. So he killed him before anyone else knows, and he'll become the King.

The Princess 02-04-2009 01:42 PM

Re: silent assassin
 
Jess is the assassin! it's obvious!

TAREK® 02-04-2009 03:16 PM

Re: silent assassin
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Malek (Post 171904)
I think it's Edgard, since after the King knew that he's not his son he decided to make Sogelec his legal heir to the throne of France. So he killed him before anyone else knows, and he'll become the King.

thats the first thing that came to my mind.... Edgard its u bro :W

The Cheese 02-04-2009 06:38 PM

Re: silent assassin
 
It's either edgard(killed him as a revenge for not being heir),jess(so she could be with phenomenal again :p) or phenomenal(so he could be with jess again :p)
But I think that's too obvious ):
Maybe someone has hidden motives :idea: but it's too early for hidden motives from the very beginning because we don't know the characters all too well ):
P.S:200th post :D:yayi:


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