Poems Competition [Vote]
 

The VcoderZ Family's Competition is proud to unleash the poems of our dear competitors...

Vote for The Best:)

NOTES:
1- NO CHEATING (specially, dun tell others about ur poems, we dun want a popularity contest, that's why we use numbers)
2- Any player who cheats, will be disqualified n warned
3- The Poll Will be Closed On Friday 20-4-07

Thx 4 ur understanding


Poem #1: English Language:

EVERY WORD IN THIS SONG IS A TITLE OF A SONG... THERES NO WORD THATS NOT A TITLE OF A SONG:
ur my little wild one
ur my riot girl
ur my everything
ur everything
to me to all
iam so jaded thinkin about u
and i dont wonna miss a thing about u
i will never say
i used to love her
and when u cry
ill whisper to u {dont cry}
and i will give u all of my love
and when ur not here ill say
to myself {wish u were here}
i like u cuz ur not like the other girls
ur the one i love
everyday will be a beautifull day
everyday ill ask u
r u gonna be my girl?
and when i melt with u well say
wat a wonderfull world
and well feel like just in heaven
on friday ill say its friday im inlove
and say to u be my angel
and ill never say to u
stupid girl
never ask u if u will fall for me
cuz u will always do
for u am a phsyco
for me ur my heroine
ull show me how to love
and ill show u how to be urself
always know that iam with you
In the end u sure know the way i feel

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well i voted for #2 amazing poem w nice words also (bas gher lon l benne:p )
nice work :D

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Number 3 ktir 7elweh kila ma3eneh w 3ibar :) besides it reminds me of an old friend

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I voted for #4!
Reason: Nothing special but all the others sucked

hehe jk :P well
1 is good, i liked the idea
2 is a nice description bas kinda shallow
3 is nice with many hidden meanings n stuff bas kinda.. "makhlouta" :P
4 is perfect! seems kinda professional and the writer certainly has a very wide vocabulary in arabic! And i personally like poems with only ONE rhyme, anddd its really a great way to see life, not optimistic, but certainly not pessimistic, and the imagery is nice..

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I voted for #1, I can really relate to it, and it has a very deep meaning...

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1 is nice, I liked the idea, 3 and 4 are very well writen,

I'm confused !

I think I'll vote without stating ...

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i think the one that this poem is for is very lucky :D:D:D

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i vote 4 number 2
the brown eyes fata7oli jro7ati :S

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# 2
la2ano 3youne benne:p
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Oh my God ! it's a very hard decision to take...
they all seem professional...

I voted # 2, why? no reason :p just kidding:p

#1 -it's very nice, it shows the real love but, her meaning is a little bit week...

#3 -it's really great, it really touched me & it shows the difficulty of life(we always hope but we're always hurt) great meaning...but I didn't really liked the questions & the repetition of them...

#4 -it's awesome, it shows a real picture of life, by telling that we'll all die one day whoever we were (even jebran died) & shows how everyone one day will be forgotten (like a page in a book that we turn) really a very big meaning, but i won't vote for it cz i stayed for about a half an hour reading it so i could understood it...

#2 -it's nice it seems that a girl wrote it, cz this is how every girl thinks & feels when she's in love & I'm a girl so this is the nearest one to me (& i liked the brown eyes) nice words used & i've understood it easily...

thank you...