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Old 04-05-2007   #45
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ps: I posted this poem even though i don't really like it, but josee never comes to school to give her my arabic poems.

She's lying I always come to school bas i don't see her

Anyway here is another poem of mine wrote kamen yesterday:

To My Murderer...The One I love...
We started our game with love and light, but it wasn’t long before we started to fight.
I wondered how, and I wondered why, you closed the door and left me behind.
When I left you, you begged me to stay, but when I was there, you pushed me away.
I got upset, you wondered why, I told you what, and you made me cry.
I was left in a room, with no-one there, you left me there and didn’t care.

What happened to the man you used to be, I loved you so much, and thought you loved me.
You held me tight, then let me go, it was like I was walking, on a thin tightrope.
You left me there, to slowly die, with pain in my heart, and tears in my eyes.
You hit me hard, then threw me away, I wanted to stay, yet wanted to go.

You never told me you loved me anyway, I wanted to end it right that day, I picked up a knife, and ended my worthless life.

The last words I murmured were:
"I want you to suffer, in this very same way, because of all the heartbreak and pain, you caused me.
From this day, my life is over, but your suffering has just begun, because you will never be loved, by anyone".


Written by me,04-04-2007, 5:30 AM
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