[Josee]

Guys,I just finished writing these two poems,read'em and give me your opinions:

You,me and my pain...
Alone again at night
To drown myself in my sorrows,
The cold wind blowing in my face
As I sit here in the dark,
A tiny candle, my only light,
A tiny flame, my only warmth,
Sit on the beach in the middle of the night
And think of nothing but you

The sand is cold,
My face is wet,
Both my wrists are bleeding,
A pool of blood on the snow white sand
That shall never be seen
I get up and slowly I walk home
Knowing that the sand holds all my secrets
And the waves are my only friends

The cold winter air bites at my face
In the flickering light of the fire,
Nobody ever sees me,
Nobody will ever know,
Know what I do in the darkness of the middle of the night
The blade glides across my wrist,
The blood runs down my arm,
It's all because of you
And still you feel no pain

Written by me,06-04-2007 1:40 AM


To the one who broke my heart...

I sit here
Alone
Thinking about you

I look down at my arm
As it drips cold tears of blood
I look at the knife
It’s shinny blade smothered in dark red

I stop and think
All this because of you!
One mistake!
Why can’t you see?

The knife goes deeper
The blood get thicker
My arm stings
I don’t say a word

Until my final breath
And…
Scream I LOVE YOU….
GOODBYE…

Written by me,06-04-2007 2:10 AM