04-06-2007
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Re: How good are you in writing?
Late at night...
I spent hours
sitting in the bed
feeling cold
looking at the clock
waiting ur call
there was no noise
calm everywhere
I couldn't see a thing
other then tears
going down
burning my face
why these tears?
Am I crying
for leaving u
or for wasting my time with u?
Are they tears of happiness
or tears of sadness?
I'm happy cz i'll never waste my time again
I'm sad cz i'll never get my heart back
Once i was told that losing a love
is finding a life
but which life ?
a life without a heart
after u broke my heart
my wounds can't be healed
after u stole my soul
who else can i found
how can i cure my wounded heart broken by u
I can't do anything
I will just keep u in mind saying :
love u or hate u it doesn't matter
it's always a feeling for u
and never forget that "I love u"
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Originally Posted by Josee
Guys,I just finished writing these two poems,read'em and give me your opinions
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Ur poems r great they really touched me... keep on the good work...
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