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Originally Posted by Josee

Guys,I just finished writing these two poems,read'em and give me your opinions:

You,me and my pain...
Alone again at night
To drown myself in my sorrows,
The cold wind blowing in my face
As I sit here in the dark,
A tiny candle, my only light,
A tiny flame, my only warmth,
Sit on the beach in the middle of the night
And think of nothing but you

The sand is cold,
My face is wet,
Both my wrists are bleeding,
A pool of blood on the snow white sand
That shall never be seen
I get up and slowly I walk home
Knowing that the sand holds all my secrets
And the waves are my only friends

The cold winter air bites at my face
In the flickering light of the fire,
Nobody ever sees me,
Nobody will ever know,
Know what I do in the darkness of the middle of the night
The blade glides across my wrist,
The blood runs down my arm,
It's all because of you
And still you feel no pain

Written by me,06-04-2007 1:40 AM

I LOVED THIS ONE .....its so full of pain , and lonliness , suits me extremely fine...anywayz i wrote the part 1 of my dead soul , and here is the second part...

for my dead soul: part 2
my soul awake
its time to go
awake awake
its time to fly away
its time to let u go
set u free
so let it be
sittin on my knee
holding my hell pass
my dead soul uv been stuck
for long time
waiting for u to awake
but ur dead am sorry
that i didnt realize
cuz i was blind
waiting for a miracle
non was there
non was gonna be
sittin on my knee
its time to go
forcefully my death
set u free
let u go
fly away
u and me
its time to seperate
like we should not
ever been together
deadly calobaration
a ****en mistake
destiny caused by
my dead soul its time to go
to set u free let u fly away