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The Wisdom
With age n experience lessons r learned In the moral of the story knowledge is earned Some correlate wisdom 2 years spent in school Dun u know the older, the wiser's the rule ? Each day u gain wisdom, u learn somethin' new Will practice make perfect in all that u do? Did ur parents do well with the values they taught? Did they tell u friendship nor love can b bought? Have u learned not 2 b bothered by the lil' things? True love can b priceless wit' the joy that it brings Cherish each day 2 the fullest, have fun, live it up C it half full when emptiness, appears in ur cup If u have a positive attitude, it will carry u far U catch more flies with honey than with vinegar Remember my words when u have a bad day When u have nuth nice than nuth u say Treat others how yu'd like 2 b treated if gd Take pride in knowin' u've done all that u could Donno what u've got till it's gone in the end B wise, take 2 heart, this msg I send PS: I use 2 write every siongle day about 3 poems.. but these days Im soo busy... but in time 2 other... I write some beefs .. i remember once we did a rap battle in here: : CLICK HERE
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I sit in this dark desolate room Contemplating suicide I can't go on anymore I'm drowning in all these tears I’ve cried I want to get out And I finally know how As I hold these razors and pills in my hand Will anyone miss me? Will anyone cry? Will anyone understand? Will you even care? Will you know why? I decided to finally end my life It’s because of you And those words that you said For a long time now I've wished I was dead But now it’s all over And this will be done But will anyone miss me Once that I’m gone ... Written by me: yesterday,04-04-07,4:02 AM
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HoW? how can i look at u when u always escape from me? how can i talk to u when u never listen to me? how can we be together .................................................. ..................................................when u dun wanna be in love with me? how can i love u forever when u've already forgot me? how can i forget u when u r stealing my heart? how can i never miss u when u keep my soul far? how can i trust u when u never love? how u love me when u r doing all of the above? how can i end this poem when my ideas abt u never stop? how can i tell u this isn't for u when I LOVE U ? ps: I posted this poem even though i don't really like it, but josee never comes to school to give her my arabic poems.
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I always come to school bas i don't see her![]() Anyway here is another poem of mine wrote kamen yesterday: To My Murderer...The One I love... We started our game with love and light, but it wasn’t long before we started to fight. I wondered how, and I wondered why, you closed the door and left me behind. When I left you, you begged me to stay, but when I was there, you pushed me away. I got upset, you wondered why, I told you what, and you made me cry. I was left in a room, with no-one there, you left me there and didn’t care. What happened to the man you used to be, I loved you so much, and thought you loved me. You held me tight, then let me go, it was like I was walking, on a thin tightrope. You left me there, to slowly die, with pain in my heart, and tears in my eyes. You hit me hard, then threw me away, I wanted to stay, yet wanted to go. You never told me you loved me anyway, I wanted to end it right that day, I picked up a knife, and ended my worthless life. The last words I murmured were: "I want you to suffer, in this very same way, because of all the heartbreak and pain, you caused me. From this day, my life is over, but your suffering has just begun, because you will never be loved, by anyone". Written by me,04-04-2007, 5:30 AM
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Guys,I just finished writing these two poems,read'em and give me your opinions:
You,me and my pain... Alone again at night To drown myself in my sorrows, The cold wind blowing in my face As I sit here in the dark, A tiny candle, my only light, A tiny flame, my only warmth, Sit on the beach in the middle of the night And think of nothing but you The sand is cold, My face is wet, Both my wrists are bleeding, A pool of blood on the snow white sand That shall never be seen I get up and slowly I walk home Knowing that the sand holds all my secrets And the waves are my only friends The cold winter air bites at my face In the flickering light of the fire, Nobody ever sees me, Nobody will ever know, Know what I do in the darkness of the middle of the night The blade glides across my wrist, The blood runs down my arm, It's all because of you And still you feel no pain Written by me,06-04-2007 1:40 AM To the one who broke my heart... I sit here Alone Thinking about you I look down at my arm As it drips cold tears of blood I look at the knife It’s shinny blade smothered in dark red I stop and think All this because of you! One mistake! Why can’t you see? The knife goes deeper The blood get thicker My arm stings I don’t say a word Until my final breath And… Scream I LOVE YOU…. GOODBYE… Written by me,06-04-2007 2:10 AM
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Late at night... I spent hours sitting in the bed feeling cold looking at the clock waiting ur call there was no noise calm everywhere I couldn't see a thing other then tears going down burning my face why these tears? Am I crying for leaving u or for wasting my time with u? Are they tears of happiness or tears of sadness? I'm happy cz i'll never waste my time again I'm sad cz i'll never get my heart back Once i was told that losing a love is finding a life but which life ? a life without a heart after u broke my heart my wounds can't be healed after u stole my soul who else can i found how can i cure my wounded heart broken by u I can't do anything I will just keep u in mind saying : love u or hate u it doesn't matter it's always a feeling for u and never forget that "I love u" .................................................. .................................................. . Quote:
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for my dead soul: part 2 my soul awake its time to go awake awake its time to fly away its time to let u go set u free so let it be sittin on my knee holding my hell pass my dead soul uv been stuck for long time waiting for u to awake but ur dead am sorry that i didnt realize cuz i was blind waiting for a miracle non was there non was gonna be sittin on my knee its time to go forcefully my death set u free let u go fly away u and me its time to seperate like we should not ever been together deadly calobaration a ****en mistake destiny caused by my dead soul its time to go to set u free let u fly away
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WHO CARES?
Unlike most, my problem is ppl do care Whenever I wanna b alone, they're always there Askin' whats wrong, is there anythin' they can do? When all I want is 5 min away from u But if I say this, then they'll want 2 know y I dun want 'em 2 know that I silently cry I want 'em 2 think that I'm happy n carefree I dun want 'em 2 worry about lil' me The cuts on my legs that no 1 knows about I want it that way, theres no reason 2 shout It used 2 b so easy 2 hide all my pain 4 the longest time no 1 suspected a thing But its gettin' harder 2 fake n I donno y So often now, ppl notice my silent "sigh" But if they knew, they would think I was crazy So often now, my days n nights become hazy If I could have 1 wish, 2 end my obsession 2 end my hurt n go 2 complete repression I'd wish so loud n confident I'd be sure 4 I know right now what would occur I'd wish 4 ppl,2 finally care 2 finally be there No more laughing or bringin' me down No more makin' me look like a clown I'd be loved by the world n I'd love 'em No more huge fights, no more mayhem Some1 2 hold me whenever I feel i wanna hide 2 help me through the nights when I want 2 die I'd never be alone again, no more heartbreak No more stupid ppl, who use me n are fake No, this time I'd meet some1 special Everyone would be trustworthy n loyal If I had one wish, I'd have some1 to love Brought down just 4 me from up above This wish would mean the world if it could b If some1 can grant 1 wish, plz 4 me I need this wish, 4 the days r gettin' tough This wish could really make my life a lot less rough I really don't wanna die or let any1 in But someday soon I'll have 2... or depression will win
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