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Old 04-03-2007   #41
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A celui qui a détruit ma vie...


Une larme est tombée sur ma joue,
Le jour où,
Un poignard me transperça le coeur,
En affectant mon àme et mon bohneur.

Ces images qui dans ma mémoire,
Que je ne peux m'empécher de revoir,
Reviennent sans cesse,
Me hante et me délaisse.

On a profité de moi,
On a détruit une partie de moi,
Pourquoi m'avoir poignardé ?
Pourquoi m'avoir forcé?

Ma blessure me gêne,
Et je ressens de la rage et de la haine,
Au plus profond de moi je me ronge et me morfonde,
Qu'ais-je fais au monde?
Pour qu'on me fasse souffrir,
Avec cette écorchure qui me fait mal à en mourir !

Je ne pourrai jamais pardonner,
Tout le mal que vous avez su me donner,
Suis-je une fille banale ?
Moi qui maintenant me sens sale ?

Après ce drame,
Qui a affaiblie la lueur de ma flamme,
Vous osez encore me regarder de haut,
Vous qui avez osé poser votre main sur ma peau !

Je me sens blaissée, humiliée,
Je n'ai qu'un désir : "me vanger"
Mais ma sensibilité,
Ne m'aurai pas épargniée,
Je suis déja assez brisée,
Et j'aimerais me sentir apaisée !


Ecrit par moi,le 6 avril 2006


A quoi se résume la vie?

A quoi se résume la vie,
Si nous devons mourir un jour.
Elle nous cause que de soucis,
En amitié comme en amour.
Nous sommes choisis parmi d'autres,
A effectuer le destin.
Etcette vie c'est la nôtre,
A personne elle n'appartient.
Si ta vie se résume à chercher le bonheur,
Parmi le mal que tu as,
Peut-être qu'au fond de ton coeur,
Un jour tu le trouveras.
Moi ma vie se résume à regarder en face,
A chercher l'erreur d'être ici,
A attendre que les jours passent,
Jusqu'à ce que se finisse ma vie...

Very nice and sensitive poems .... thanks for sharing ....
i think writing poems is not so easy .... it comes from the bottom of the heart to express feelings and humor!!



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Old 04-03-2007   #42
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The Wisdom

With age n experience lessons r learned
In the moral of the story knowledge is earned
Some correlate wisdom 2 years spent in school
Dun u know the older, the wiser's the rule ?

Each day u gain wisdom, u learn somethin' new
Will practice make perfect in all that u do?
Did ur parents do well with the values they taught?
Did they tell u friendship nor love can b bought?

Have u learned not 2 b bothered by the lil' things?
True love can b priceless wit' the joy that it brings
Cherish each day 2 the fullest, have fun, live it up
C it half full when emptiness, appears in ur cup

If u have a positive attitude, it will carry u far
U catch more flies with honey than with vinegar
Remember my words when u have a bad day
When u have nuth nice than nuth u say

Treat others how yu'd like 2 b treated if gd
Take pride in knowin' u've done all that u could
Donno what u've got till it's gone in the end
B wise, take 2 heart, this msg I send

PS: I use 2 write every siongle day about 3 poems.. but these days Im soo busy... but in time 2 other... I write some beefs.. i remember once we did a rap battle in here:: CLICK HERE
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Old 04-05-2007   #43
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Will Anyone Miss Me?

I sit in this dark desolate room
Contemplating suicide
I can't go on anymore
I'm drowning in all these tears I’ve cried
I want to get out
And I finally know how
As I hold these razors and pills in my hand
Will anyone miss me?
Will anyone cry?
Will anyone understand?
Will you even care?
Will you know why?
I decided to finally end my life
It’s because of you
And those words that you said
For a long time now
I've wished I was dead
But now it’s all over
And this will be done
But will anyone miss me
Once that I’m gone ...


Written by me: yesterday,04-04-07,4:02 AM
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Old 04-05-2007   #44
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HoW?

how can i look at u
when u always escape from me?
how can i talk to u
when u never listen to me?

how can we be together
when u dun wanna be in love with me?
how can i love u forever
when u've already forgot me?


how can i forget u
when u r stealing my heart?
how can i never miss u
when u keep my soul far?


how can i trust u
when u never love?
how u love me
when u r doing all of the above?


how can i end this poem
when my ideas abt u never stop?
how can i tell u this isn't for u
when I LOVE U ?
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ps: I posted this poem even though i don't really like it, but josee never comes to school to give her my arabic poems.

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ps: I posted this poem even though i don't really like it, but josee never comes to school to give her my arabic poems.

She's lying I always come to school bas i don't see her

Anyway here is another poem of mine wrote kamen yesterday:

To My Murderer...The One I love...
We started our game with love and light, but it wasn’t long before we started to fight.
I wondered how, and I wondered why, you closed the door and left me behind.
When I left you, you begged me to stay, but when I was there, you pushed me away.
I got upset, you wondered why, I told you what, and you made me cry.
I was left in a room, with no-one there, you left me there and didn’t care.

What happened to the man you used to be, I loved you so much, and thought you loved me.
You held me tight, then let me go, it was like I was walking, on a thin tightrope.
You left me there, to slowly die, with pain in my heart, and tears in my eyes.
You hit me hard, then threw me away, I wanted to stay, yet wanted to go.

You never told me you loved me anyway, I wanted to end it right that day, I picked up a knife, and ended my worthless life.

The last words I murmured were:
"I want you to suffer, in this very same way, because of all the heartbreak and pain, you caused me.
From this day, my life is over, but your suffering has just begun, because you will never be loved, by anyone".


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Guys,I just finished writing these two poems,read'em and give me your opinions:

You,me and my pain...
Alone again at night
To drown myself in my sorrows,
The cold wind blowing in my face
As I sit here in the dark,
A tiny candle, my only light,
A tiny flame, my only warmth,
Sit on the beach in the middle of the night
And think of nothing but you

The sand is cold,
My face is wet,
Both my wrists are bleeding,
A pool of blood on the snow white sand
That shall never be seen
I get up and slowly I walk home
Knowing that the sand holds all my secrets
And the waves are my only friends

The cold winter air bites at my face
In the flickering light of the fire,
Nobody ever sees me,
Nobody will ever know,
Know what I do in the darkness of the middle of the night
The blade glides across my wrist,
The blood runs down my arm,
It's all because of you
And still you feel no pain

Written by me,06-04-2007 1:40 AM


To the one who broke my heart...

I sit here
Alone
Thinking about you

I look down at my arm
As it drips cold tears of blood
I look at the knife
It’s shinny blade smothered in dark red

I stop and think
All this because of you!
One mistake!
Why can’t you see?

The knife goes deeper
The blood get thicker
My arm stings
I don’t say a word

Until my final breath
And…
Scream I LOVE YOU….
GOODBYE…

Written by me,06-04-2007 2:10 AM
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Late at night...

I spent hours
sitting in the bed
feeling cold
looking at the clock
waiting ur call
there was no noise
calm everywhere
I couldn't see a thing
other then tears
going down
burning my face
why these tears?
Am I crying
for leaving u
or for wasting my time with u?
Are they tears of happiness
or tears of sadness?
I'm happy cz i'll never waste my time again
I'm sad cz i'll never get my heart back
Once i was told that losing a love
is finding a life
but which life ?
a life without a heart
after u broke my heart
my wounds can't be healed
after u stole my soul
who else can i found
how can i cure my wounded heart broken by u
I can't do anything
I will just keep u in mind saying :
love u or hate u it doesn't matter
it's always a feeling for u


and never forget that "I love u"
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Guys,I just finished writing these two poems,read'em and give me your opinions
Ur poems r great they really touched me... keep on the good work...
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Ur poems r great they really touched me... keep on the good work...
Thanks Karla...Yours are great too...
I'll share new ones as soon as I finish writing..
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Guys,I just finished writing these two poems,read'em and give me your opinions:

You,me and my pain...
Alone again at night
To drown myself in my sorrows,
The cold wind blowing in my face
As I sit here in the dark,
A tiny candle, my only light,
A tiny flame, my only warmth,
Sit on the beach in the middle of the night
And think of nothing but you

The sand is cold,
My face is wet,
Both my wrists are bleeding,
A pool of blood on the snow white sand
That shall never be seen
I get up and slowly I walk home
Knowing that the sand holds all my secrets
And the waves are my only friends

The cold winter air bites at my face
In the flickering light of the fire,
Nobody ever sees me,
Nobody will ever know,
Know what I do in the darkness of the middle of the night
The blade glides across my wrist,
The blood runs down my arm,
It's all because of you
And still you feel no pain

Written by me,06-04-2007 1:40 AM
I LOVED THIS ONE .....its so full of pain , and lonliness , suits me extremely fine...anywayz i wrote the part 1 of my dead soul , and here is the second part...

for my dead soul: part 2
my soul awake
its time to go
awake awake
its time to fly away
its time to let u go
set u free
so let it be
sittin on my knee
holding my hell pass
my dead soul uv been stuck
for long time
waiting for u to awake
but ur dead am sorry
that i didnt realize
cuz i was blind
waiting for a miracle
non was there
non was gonna be
sittin on my knee
its time to go
forcefully my death
set u free
let u go
fly away
u and me
its time to seperate
like we should not
ever been together
deadly calobaration
a ****en mistake
destiny caused by
my dead soul its time to go
to set u free let u fly away
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WHO CARES?

Unlike most, my problem is ppl do care
Whenever I wanna b alone, they're always there
Askin' whats wrong, is there anythin' they can do?
When all I want is 5 min away from u
But if I say this, then they'll want 2 know y
I dun want 'em 2 know that I silently cry

I want 'em 2 think that I'm happy n carefree
I dun want 'em 2 worry about lil' me
The cuts on my legs that no 1 knows about
I want it that way, theres no reason 2 shout
It used 2 b so easy 2 hide all my pain
4 the longest time no 1 suspected a thing
But its gettin' harder 2 fake n I donno y
So often now, ppl notice my silent "sigh"
But if they knew, they would think I was crazy
So often now, my days n nights become hazy

If I could have 1 wish, 2 end my obsession
2 end my hurt n go 2 complete repression
I'd wish so loud n confident I'd be sure
4 I know right now what would occur

I'd wish 4 ppl,2 finally care
2 finally be there
No more laughing or bringin' me down
No more makin' me look like a clown

I'd be loved by the world n I'd love 'em
No more huge fights, no more mayhem
Some1 2 hold me whenever I feel i wanna hide
2 help me through the nights when I want 2 die

I'd never be alone again, no more heartbreak
No more stupid ppl, who use me n are fake
No, this time I'd meet some1 special
Everyone would be trustworthy n loyal

If I had one wish, I'd have some1 to love
Brought down just 4 me from up above
This wish would mean the world if it could b
If some1 can grant 1 wish, plz 4 me
I need this wish, 4 the days r gettin' tough
This wish could really make my life a lot less rough

I really don't wanna die or let any1 in
But someday soon I'll have 2... or depression will win
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