Poems & Rhymes

[Justin]

This one is for the unleashed Talents. Any Poem you feel like writing, any rhymes, Just Do It right here...

[Justin]

She was my best friend for ever
I thought our friendship will never be over

till the day she messed up her life
I wanted to be there for her and help her survive

she managed to twist things up
and made it my fault
I let it go and accepted it
cause I knew that she was the girl with the broken heart

that wasn't good enough for her
so she pushed me around some more
I felt blood boiling in my veins
and to put a stop for her I swore

she screwed up her life
and went after mine
so nothing I do to her
will be considered a crime

I didn't do much anyway
I just searched for the thing she loved the most
and took it away

[Justin]

Started out as friends
nothin' more nothin' less
but friendships turn 2 love & i'm a victim i confess
it aint somethin' that u ask 4
it's a gift from above
4 the blessings we receive we should really thank the Lord
he giveth & he taketh
but i'm a man & like a man is how i take it
so dear Lord don't test my patience
u sent her 2 me, touched my heart soothly
took me 4 a fool cuz then u drew her from me
u dont do that 2 a man cuz know im trapped
in a space of loneliness that u built without a map
i cant find my way around
so i stumble 2 the ground
hold my head up high, then tears drip down my eyes
the truth of the matter is u really let down ur kidd
& forgivin' is part of life but me i aint wit that ishh
miserable, gloomy & confused
this is really not the ending that i would've chose for u
love, marriage, kids & eternal life
instead "why me" r the words that i now recite
shit happens 4 a reason
but ur reasons are unknown
because He's with the 1 i love, here's my sad song!!!

[RockGurl]

My love for u, is carried inside me forever.
It'll continue to grow, and help in keeping us together.
It's inside my heart, beneath my skin,
Never to leave us apart, and carry the rhythm within.

The rhythm of love, which I'll never release,
Sent by God above, I'm begging him to keep it "please".
No matter how many days, even if i lose control of the time,
I'll hold ur love for always, and say "ur mine".

Inside ur arms, I feel so safe,
You're like my shelter, which protects me from life's pain.
Your love is like a dove, flies with its wings,
Goes above, with the happiness it brings.

You brighten my soul, make it sparkle and glow,
Making it whole, and continuing to grow,
Inside me, there is no fear,
For ur love u see, will always dry my angelic tears.

Those three words, which I never thought I'd say before,
I'm saying it now to u, many times a day and even more.
I just hope I hold u tight, every single day,
Treating u right, and never letting u go away.

I'd cross all those miles, through the rivers and hills,
Just to see u smile, and have my heart to fill.

I just hope u realize,
How perfect u are through my eyes,
You'll keep me so much stronger,
For eternity and even longer.

[Justin]

Ever since u left
I've been stuck with myself
Listenin' 2 the voices once again
Insane & sick are all thats become of me in this end

I may seem alright but every time i close my eyes
Images of you start another fight
Deep within me full of broken tears tonight

No one really wants to save me
Take me, help me, escaping me, show me
The difference between love & crazy

I've lost a family, a friend, a life
I've received a broken heart,
now I'm alone and shattered,
where did all this wrong start?

[god]

Originally Posted by Justin

This feeling is no longer an obsession,
It all became the greatest depression.
All the happiness and emotion
Slowly turned into potion.

The cruel way in which you hide,
And how you cheated and lied.
It broke my heart,
And it's slowly starting to fall apart.

Why did it happen to me?
Pain and tears are always for me.
Please, listen to my screams....
All cause of my broken dreams.

Through this poem, I'm trying to explain
The greatness of my pain.
But no one will ever understand
The fear in which today I stand

Please do not expect me to explain,
For I can not explain what I do not feel,
Please do not speak,
For I do not hear,
I am not here,
You can only see my shell,
The shell is hollow inside,
I have died,
I do not exist,
When you look into my eyes,
You can see nothing but coldness,
I cannot be loved,
For I am not here,
My spark has been blown out,

The spark in me has burnt out,
The fun has gone,
The sky is dull,
It's just me,
Me getting pulled through bad times,
I don't say how I feel,
I think how I feel,
I'm hiding all the pain,
Putting on a fake smile,
The pain is growing without anyone knowing,
It's just me

A smile can brighten up someone’s day,
A smile can take all the pain and sorrows away,
This smile can hide all the sadness inside,
This smile can convince someone that you are fine,
But you can never convince yourself,
However hard you try…
Cause IT’S JUST ME…

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[Jean]

The hope



this is your life when you grow-up in this hood
when you feel like you're a man,but you search for your food
you're very tired,when it's like a big obstacle slowing down you're knees
freinds ain't freinds no more,they're your enemies,you have to seize
life ain't so cute,you have money,you act like you're funny
you're tired of commiting so many sins,you're very skinny
you're in sorrow, you're in troubles,
when you feel the pain,you feel the noize
It's a life full a mayhem,you have no choice
com'on wake-up,it's just a nightmare
it's behind you,in your home and anywhere
you need a help,but anyone don't care,that's not fair
but you still own yourself,that's your last hope
you have responsibilies,it's like you taked a dope
think about it,you have a life,and now you're free
forgot about the streets,what you always see
the drugs,the murderers and all those stealers
who are playing so hard their so dirtier
than you thought,they have no heart,they're like the blood suckers
I'm warning you,look at the life,it's very eyeful
when you have you liberty,now you're so delightful
and whatch what you'll say,cuz there's a lot of pimps
who prepared your coffin,they're like the shrimps
and you're just a fish,with no legs,but you have a dignity
when you feel your freedom,and the responsibility
you became so reverand if you believe that you're free


written by patrioticmcjay

[Jean]

It's just Fo' Ya


I'm very tired very angry
maybe cuz I'm real I live in the realm
or maybe cuz I caused a revolution
I can't understand everything I'll do soon
I meant in future,It's appearing very hard
it's complicated every step,every yard
If I thought that every moment is my chance
I'll explode,I have a life that i have to enhance
or It will be like a champ with no fans
I keep thinkin' every night,what's the wrong and what's the right
should I walk weak or very tight
I'm.....shit..forgot about it(please)
you have all rights,that's what I admit
you were in my dreams,I think no mo' right now,in my nightmares you'll be
you might have,yes you have to hate me
my feelings are going to be flabby
y'all think love is life,or life is love,am I insane
get ready to think that love is pain,love is the rain
that it can destroy all the snow (Between me and you)
If I'll give the chance to talk,don't blow
respect me,I ain't gonna slow--down
cuz love is feelings not just a noun
look thru my eyez,I said look
you can say that you hate my look
simply say it don't make a fake
you hate me or maybe you don't like me,even that I don't know why u cheat
I don't have to be freak
I'm not happy but I'm ain't angry or nervous
cuz in the end,It's the reality I have to choose
if you read this you'll think that's a shit of blues
But look baby between the lines
I know you won't,your heart ain't like mine
maybe your face is like the sunshine
I Loved twice ,I think you too but nine times
after that day,I thought I'm free
but in fact I'm prisonned can't you see??!!
you're also prisonned but in my heart
extremly you're free,you like a bird,like a fab art
all I did was my real person not something for you
so if your blue eyes are a dough for you
may lord protect them and you
sorry If I repeated The"You" But it's just for you
you're very important for me
like the water for the earth and the sea
I'm collapsing and I'm acting Like I don't know who
really I thought you have a thing in you
that you can love,but I haven't any clue
please foregive me,It's The first Time I say this
maybe the words can't replace the feelings
But I'm just trying thru my end
though if I keep walkin thru the valley of death teared by my hand
but expect in your dreams every single day
my heart's bleeding and leaking many way
may this shit be the hate,love or probly pain
probly bad since my brain--was corrupted
It's very hard to remeniss When I've been rocked
But It seems that I keep flying
thru an empty way,I Think It's hard very heavy...


written by patrioticmcjay

[questions]

TEENAGER

I look into the mirror and what do I see
a growing man i used to call me
as 'me' started to change i dont know why
one moment i would laugh the next i would cry
my feelings go wild my emtions insane
my family is one thing to me just a pain
i feel misplaced like i dont belong
everything do to my parents is wrong
no question about it my friens are changing to
but some how differently what should i do
some don't understand what it is to mature
they act like their babies thats for sure
time is changing , things are rough
no one ever said life is this tough
one day im a child with a cerfew of nine
the next im a grownup, where's the line
since when are girls different and i start to see
that she's just a erson but the world to me
things are important that weren't before
life is precious it means so much more
i just need someone to tell me they care
and no matter what happens they'll always be there

[Justin]

'ey "patrioticmcjay", ur lyrics are gr8..wanna beef up wit' me?